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 *TODO: Menna is in charge of this section
 (not written in section title itself
-because this section must use the exact name for layout to work)*
+since this section must have specific name for layout to work)*
 
 This project explores the development of a prototype voting system
 inspired by the natural behavior of freshwater mussels
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ is illustration and demostration purposes.
 *TODO: come back and write about each step,
 OUR THREE REQUIRED COMPONENTS,and a conclusion*
 
-# Introduction - amal
+# Introduction
 
 In Poland, several waterworks use biomonitoring systems
 that rely on freshwater mussels to detect water contamination
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ by an existing study and implemenation,
 we wish to delineate ourselves from the real-world criterias
 that concerns this technology and actual authentic mussel behaviour.
 
-# Project Planning and theoretical framework - amal og menna
+# Project Planning and theoretical framework
 
 ## Use of course curriculum
 
@@ -208,10 +208,6 @@ under the GNU Public Licence version 3 or newer,
 and non-code parts are licensed
 under the Creative Commons crediting share-alike 4.0.
 
-# User Guide (product use) - Tanishka {#sec-user-guide}
-
-*TODO*
-
 # Analysis and Design (physical components) - Menna
 
 The physical setup of our prototype consists
@@ -321,23 +317,19 @@ smooth and quiet, no "Boom!"*
 
 *TODO*
 
-# Testing - tanishka
+# Testing - Tanishka
 
 *TODO*
 
-# Discussion and reflections- jonas
+# Product Use - Tanishka
+
+*TODO*
 
-*TODO: discussion about our project
-e.g. what could have been included, what we could not make  
-SUGGESTION: reflection/discussion about,
-whether used the guide from role 3 archetype
-(see course curriculum),
-and if it was helpful/right/wrong*
+# Discussion and reflections
 
-We have chosen not to involve generative artificial intelligence (AI)
-in this project,
+This project does not involve generative artificial intelligence (AI)
 due to its scope of data collecting and processing
-from a source of simple imitations of living organisms.
+from a source of simple simulations of living organisms.
 Related but different projects might sensibly involve AI,
 e.g. training an AI with sensor data from real living mussels,
 either unsupervised to aid in discovering behavioural patterns
@@ -366,7 +358,7 @@ given more realistic sensor data,
 mainly by rewriting the function `alignVotes()`
 (see code listing lines 154-176 in @sec-vote of Appendix).
 
-# Conclusion - menna
+# Conclusion - Menna
 
 *TODO*