From 4672230ba750b2546152796df1946e25b4bd5b96 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jonas Smedegaard <dr@jones.dk>
Date: Sat, 1 Mar 2025 11:40:43 +0100
Subject: refine roadmap and roadmap docs

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@@ -10,21 +10,26 @@ to support team-based self-organization
 [@Anderson2016, pp. xi-1].
 
 Two core principles of kanban
-is to maintain a visual overview of relevant tasks
-and a sense of sustainability of the work on those tasks.
+is to visually present an overview of tasks
+as a way of identifying them,
+and
+associating tasks with a progress state
+as a way of managing flow of progress.
 Commonly a two-dimensional kanban board provides overview,
-with individual tasks listed vertically,
-and divisions of task states horisontally,
-and the even or uneven spread of tasks among divisions
-is used to indicate if workload is sustainable
-[@Anderson2016, pp. 7-8, 18].
+with individual tasks listed vertically
+and divisions of task states horisontally
+[@Anderson2016, p. 18].
+One of the aims of these principles is
+to establish a sense of sustainability
+in the pace of working on the tasks involved in a project
+[@Anderson2016, pp. 7-8].
 
 In this project,
 the tool roadmap is used for visualizing the tasks.
 Reason for this choice is an interest in creating an atmosphere
 supportive of creative thinking and reflective learning
 rather than efficiency,
-where the assembly line metaphor of conventional kanban boards
+for which the assembly line metaphor of conventional kanban boards
 is considered counterproductive.
 
 Roadmap is a command-line tool
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